She was barely 2 months old when my boyfriend adopted her. We named her Leia, like the princess. She is a Red Nose Pitbull, white and caramel. I often say she looks like a Cinnamon Roll. When we are watching TV on the bed, she always jumps in between us and her white hair never leaves your black pants or jackets. She likes to lay next to me, bit with her butt on my face. When I tell her to switch sides, she ignores me, but when I say: DOWN! She immediately turns around and literally hugs me. Every time we leave the house, she howls and the whole building hears her. “Your dog cried all day,” said a note we found under the door one time we left her for 2 hours. She is way too needy, she doesn’t know how to be alone, but she is the reason my boyfriend’s happier than ever. When she turned 3 years old we found a male Pitbull for her named Draco, whose head's like 3 times bigger than Leia’s. A few weeks later, the vet confirmed Leia was pregnant. Her belly got bigger and bigg...
The first line nicely establishes the couple's relationship, and the difference in their signatures was an effective way to show the reader how they feel about the split. We had very similar ideas!
ResponderEliminarThanks Nate! I know!!! I wrote my Kimo on my blog and when I opened the grid I saw DIVORCE and thought: no way! haha what were the odds?
EliminarThis was really well done. I have read it through several times now and my mind lingers on a different word or line each time.
ResponderEliminarWow, thanks!! It was a real challenge for me to make this form of poetry. So happy to know you liked it.
EliminarWhat a way with words. Enjoyed reading this kimo.
ResponderEliminarThanks, Ruby! For reading and commenting.
EliminarI really enjoyed this piece - it's so vivid and you convey so many emotions through the objects that are present or absent
ResponderEliminarThank you Sanch, I really appreciate your comments!
EliminarThe imagery is so crisp and it captures the moment perfectly.
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